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     In a freezing cold day in January 1994,Jiesang Suonandajie found that he was looking    ①改为②改为

for-a group of poachers who were killing the endanger Tibetan antelope. Jiesang knew he  ③改为 ④改为

had to move quick.He shouted to the poachers to put down his guns. Although  surprising,⑤改为 ⑥改为

the poachers had an advantage -there were fewer of them. In the battle which followed      ⑦改为 ⑧改为

Jiesang  shot and killed. When his frozen body was found hours late he was still holding his ⑨改为 ⑩改为

gun. He had given his life save the Tibetan antelope. ​