增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
⑴每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
⑵只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
What is the standard of beauty？Different time have different standards. In our parents' generation, it is believed that a girl should be a little fatter, because it meant that she lived better life. While the thin girls, which would be thought to be lacking for happiness, were not appreciated. And today, the most important standard of beauty is to be thin. The thinner, the better. At the commercial ads, all of the models are skinny, look so elegant. When I see my friends work hardly to lose weight, I feel worried about them. The beauty's standard will change over time and that health is more important than meeting any supposing standard of beauty.
