假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ˄),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: ①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;②只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Next Saturday will be my eighteen birthday. To celebrating that meaningful day, my parents had intended to hold a party in a restaurant. However, I persuade them yesterday morning to buy a young tree to me as my birthday gift. On that important day, I will plant in our own yard myself.
In my opinions, celebrating my birthday by holding a dinner party are not only wasteful but also meaningless. With a tree planted in our own yard, we will never forget that significance day. What's the more, whenever I see that tree, it will remind me of my parents love for me.