Dear Liz,
Thank you very much your letter and the photos of your (friend) and family. Your parents and friends look (real) nice in the photo. Now I can tell you something about me and my family here in New York.
I have two brothers. (they) names are Lukas and Andreas. They (be) 16 and 19. My mother is Christine. She is a teacher. She (work) in No.1 high school. My dad, Dieter, is a doctor in hospital. There are four bedrooms and a small garden in our house. My room is tidy, but my (brother) is not. They don't often clean it. I like playing volleyball, they don't like it. They like playing basketball. We have a dog, Zak, and we think he's cute. We (love) it a lot.
Please tell me all about your friends and school in your next letter. I'd like to know about English schools.
Love,
Laura