假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加和一个单词的删除，其他错误为单词 的修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号A,并在其下面写出增加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Tim,

Thanks for your e-mail. I go to visit my grandparents yesterday, so I have to write to you today. It's 7:00 p. m. now. My father is cook dinner, and my mother is talking to him. We'd like to eat noodle for dinner. They always taste well. My sister is reading hers favorite story. Cars and buses are coming and going quick outside. I can see some boys in the park next my home, and they are playing the soccer.

It's really a noisy and happy evening. Do you think so? Please writing to me soon.

Yours,

Daniel