Dear Tom,
My name is Liu Yun. I'm 8-year-old girl. I'm the only kid in my family. My birthday is October 1st. It's the (one) day of the tenth month. It's also the National Day(国庆节). My parents often have a party for me that day. My friends (come) to the party. They bring me many birthday presents(礼物), and they sing a song "Happy Birthday you".
(us) eat some fruits: strawberries, oranges apples. We eat chicken and cakes dinner. We also play (sport). We have a (relax) time! What's your age? When is your birthday? Can you let me know?