假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It was spring on March. With the comfortable weather and warmth sunshine, our class had a spring outing on Saturday. We gathered at the school gate, there the bus was waiting for us. We went to Renmin Park hold some activities and all of my classmate were so excited that they looked like the birds just coming out from birdcages. We playing games there and fished in the river. At the same time, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of spring, but all of us were satisfied. Some people in the park also joined us and had a fun. We had a happier day and the relationship of classmates were getting closer.